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XRacers Race Nvart Contest

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Here, the second and the last picture of X-Racers, the future of the Formula 1.

Software : AliasStudio - Vray - Photoshop CS5

You can see the result of the contest on CGSociety
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Now this one looks really good.

Unlike my suggestion for the effect in Race XFRS NVart Contest, the zoom-blur works really well here.

From the angle of the shot, I'd assume that it was taken by a floating camera (be it built into a balloon or drone or whatever device that can fly or hover) while the track (in my own imagination) slopes upward beyond the curve forcing the camera which a split-second ago was focusing at the actions on the curve to zoom-out in order to capture a clear view of red flying towards it; therefore your zoom-blur effect this in piece worked out great!

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="11" height="16" alt=":lightbulb:" title="Lightbulb"/> I have only two minor opinions:

1.) The focal-point of the zoom-effect could be a little bit closer to the curve since I have a feeling that the track start sloping upward halfway between your current focal-point and that shadow of the building on the ground. Assuming that the person who was controlling the cam (you) knows the track and the nature of the race really well, you might wanna zoom out a split-second earlier.

2.) Add some blur to red which will give the impression that it's swiping across the camera. The blur would be heavy around the wings and tail and falloff toward to front so we see some details of the plain (and the AMD logo)

Anyway those are just my opinion, this piece looks great and I just want to say "Awesome job!"

Cheers~